Today we had a runthru the HAIRSPRAY cast. It went exceedingly well, though I believe it was a step back in some ways from yesterday. Well, not a step back in terms of a set back. Just not as smooth is certain ways.
Kirche the costume designer was in attendance.
I believe the running time, what should be known in theater as "THE ONLY EMPIRICAL EVIDENCE", was about three minutes shorter. So we are down to 97 minutes from 104 minutes two runs ago.
I think the top of the show was sloppier - Clifton and Wendell reported out of body experiences. Wendell seemed to miss all of the good solid work we worked out yesterday. All the time at the top of the play washing the floors. It just seemed like random stage business as opposed to a method of cleaning. When its working right, he seems like he is part of the fabric of the play. When its off, I feel responsible: "who told him to mop the floor like that?" Oy. The "heartfelt groan" after the spitting is noticeably subdued.
We had a long long discussion about it yesterday. For me, his reaction was not only ruining the impact of the spit - but storywise, was missing the point. His groan was more like an attempt at preventing the event, rather than an acknowledgment that it was all over. the difference between trying to catch a baby thrown out of the window and missing catching it versus realizing afterwards what's happened. The difference between an expulsion of air, and a deep sigh. Reaching versus sinking.
It's better - just not quite there.
Guiesseppe is tapping into some great heavy heartfelt stuff. His "should i hit him Willie?" WHY NOT?""" was very scary - but taken too far and I think missed the point. I had no reason to believe that Sam wouldn't deck Hally. His speech about feeling like a failure - and the event of going into the bar with Hally and lifting up hally's father is really close. He needs to fight through the obstacle a little more.
We worked the spit and the mooning. It was brave. The power went out at some point during the run and well, it came back on when Guiesseppe mooned. Funny...but more to the point, fucking brave.
The spit needed work. I've asked Clifton to plant himself and not do a running spit - but a quick turn, plant, spit...We'll see how it goes tomorrow.
I felt the ending was a little forced. But hey, they needed to go that far with an audience if only to feel just that - that it went too far emotionally, and sort of robbed us of having emotions.
Clifton on the other hand needs to allow the obstacle at the end. I want him to be an open vessel post spit.
His work is getting much more grounded. I feel he needs to be reminded that Hally is a kid who lives in his mind. Clifton is much looser and freer in his body than I want Hally to be. I did something very hard today which was ask him to cut some of his laughs. His laughs take me out - and I've asked him to use the words themselves to laugh through. The effect is a deepening of Hally. Clifton needs to be reminded that he is 17 enough as is. I don't think he thinks he is playing at 17 - but certain choices he's made (his laugh, parts of his physicality) have the unintended consequence of keeping his voice too high. And it doesn't need to be. As I've said before, a 17 year old thinks he is an adult.
There was not a dry eye in the house.